Hooked on Nonfiction: How About You?
Speech by Penny Colman
The Ohio State University’s Children’s Literature Conference 2004
Columbus, Ohio
It was in early October of 1953 when my mother took me with her to look for the gypsies. She was a photojournalist for a local newspaper in Warren, Pennsylvania. I was nine years old. She had heard a rumor that the gypsies were camping at Lake Erie State Park, a park on the eastern shore of Lake Erie about an hour’s drive from North Warren, Pennsylvania, where we lived.
Off we went in our baby blue Ford station wagon. Upon entering the park, we drove around until suddenly we spotted the gypsies coming out of a wooded area and “down the hillside in a graceful line”--women with “touselheaded babies” and men and boys and girls, especially, I remember, a girl my age named Eda who had my same dark brown eyes and dark hair and darkish complexion that had made me feel different from most of the people in my family and in the town where we lived (M. Morgan, 1953).
I am not one of those people who is full of growing-up memories. But that experience is one I have never forgotten. Were they really gypsies? To the nine-year old me, yes. To the fifty-nine year old me, I am not sure. But I am sure that that adventure of going off with my mother with her notepad and pencil and camera in search of real people doing real things in a real place helped hook me on nonfiction.
My father’s writing activities also sparked my interest in nonfiction. He was a psychiatrist and a few months before I had my gypsy adventure with my mother, my father had started writing a newspaper column, “Everyday Psychology.” Occasionally, Dad wrote about our family, as evidenced by this excerpt from his column that appeared the day before Christmas in 1953:
“A few days before Christmas my whole family went out to the woods to cut our tree. The snow was deep, the path long, and the wind very cold. Before we had fetched our Christmas tree back to the car, I heard grumbling complaints about cold feet and frost-nipped ears. Someone even mumbled phrases that sounded very much like, ‘next year I hope we buy our tree.’ A warm house and hot soup brought a glow to our faces. One of the boys looked up showing a broad smile. He said, ‘That was real fun, Daddy. Are you going to write about it for the paper?’” (N. Morgan, 1953).
The fact that he did reinforced the idea in me that real people doing real things in real places are interesting and worth writing about. His columns also showed me that nonfiction was a valuable vehicle for sharing stories and discussing issues and ideas.
I also learned through other articles Dad wrote, that writing nonfiction was a way to bring about change, or at least to try, a big value in my family. In particular I remember an article Dad wrote in which he exposed poor conditions and shoddy treatment of patients in mental institutions in Pennsylvania.
With this nonfiction lineage, no wonder I got hooked on nonfiction. That does not mean, however, that I inhabited a fictionless world. As a kid and teenager, I remember reading the Bobbsey Twins, Nancy Drew, and then Pearl Buck’s The Good Earth (1931) and all the historical fiction of Thomas Costain. My mother wrote and illustrated fiction stories that I read, including “A Tale for Hallowe’en that appeared in the newspaper several weeks after her “Gypsies,” piece appeared. (M. Morgan, 1953)
As an adult the first thing I wrote for children was fiction--a picture booklet, titled I Know What To Do!” illustrated by my mother that I self-published under the name P.G. Morgan (1978). I later expanded it and Paulist Press published it with the title, Dark Closets and Noises in the Dark (1991). I also wrote the fiction picture book, I Never Do Anything Bad (1988) and numerous fiction stories for children’s magazines (1989-1991).
If you are wondering why I included this discussion about me and fiction, the answer is: in order to dispel any notions that the fact that I am hooked on nonfiction means that I am anti-fiction, unlike people in American history who have been. For example, listen to the warning that appeared in the 1860s in “Godey’s Lady’s Book” that reading fiction meant that “the mind is frittered away, and all strength of reasoning and seriousness of reflection gradually deserts the unfortunate student.” Or like Frances Willard, the legendary 19th social reformer, who devoted a whole chapter warning against “Novel-Reading” in her bestselling book, How to Win (103). “The young people who read the greatest quantity of novels know the least, are the dullest in aspect, and the most vapid in conversations. The flavor of individuality has been burned out of them. Always imagining themselves in an artificial relation to life…they become as common place as pawns upon a chess-board.”
No, I am not anti-fiction, however, I am gravely concerned that anti-nonfictionism, to coin a new word, is all too common in classrooms and curricula across America.
That anti-nonfictionism manifests itself in multiple ways. Here are four ways that I have observed through my experiences as a professional writer, a veteran of author’s visits to schools, and a faculty member in teacher education programs.
1) When I go to schools I am often told that I am the first ever nonfiction author to visit. This has happened all across the country, including southern New Jersey, Iowa, and California.
2) When I survey publishers’ catalogues listing their children’s book, I typically count far more fiction books than nonfiction books. The reason I was recently told by a publisher is that nonfiction is typically more expensive to publish than fiction.
3) When I ask teachers who are taking my classes to do an inventory of the books in their classrooms, they overwhelmingly report that fiction books greatly outnumber nonfiction books, and, the nonfiction books they do have are typically limited to a particular topic, e.g. dinosaurs, and most have copyright dates from the 1980s and early 1990s.
4) When I read the professional literature about children’s nonfiction, I encounter a plethora of myths and misconceptions. Even well-intentioned people repeat the notion that nonfiction is boring and difficult to read. Based on what, I ask? Says, who, I ask?
Certainly not my parents or the teachers who tell me that their students love nonfiction.
Or the cartoonist Lynda Barry who produced a cartoon titled “Nonfictional” in which she placed her young character Arna Arneson in a library and had her declare that nonfiction is her favorite section (2002). Or, my three sons, especially my son Jonathan who from an early age relished reading the various volumes of the World Books, so much so that, before too long, I plan to give his newly born first child, my first grandchild, a set of her very own.
Another example from my list of myths and misconceptions is the set of equations: nonfiction=information and fiction=pleasure. These equations are evoked in various ways, including to teach children about writers’ motives, as in, “Writers write nonfiction to convey information.” and “Writers write fiction to convey pleasure.” Oh, really, I say, and I dive into my fat file of quotations about why real writers say they really write.
George Orwell, who wrote both nonfiction and fiction, listed “four great motives”
in his 1946 essay titled “Why I Write” -“sheer egoism, esthetic enthusiasm, historical impulse, and political purpose” (p. 312). Terry Tempest Williams, a nonfiction writer, listed 74 reasons in an essay she wrote in 2001 with the same title “Why I Write,” including “I write to make peace with the things I cannot control… I write to discover. I write to uncover. I write to meet my ghosts…I write because I believe in words…I write as a witness to what I have seen…I write because I am not employable…I write as though I am whispering in the ear of the one I love” (pp. 6-7).
And here are what more writers say: Maya Angelou-- “I write because I love language” (Smith, p. 43). Louise Erdrich--“I can’t help it” (Smith, p. 187). Cynthia Voigt-“to impose a little order on a world that looks pretty chaotic” (Smith, p. 200). Katherine Paterson-“Because I loved to read.” (Paterson, 1988) Paula Gunn Allen-“Beats me. I don’t know” (Smith, p. 129). Barbara Ehrenreich, “There are two motivations: one is to make a change…The other is sheer curiosity” (Ehrenreich, 2003). Money is also a motive, as it was for Louisa May Alcott and Mary Mapes Dodge who needed to support their families.
In his new book about Dr. Seuss, Philip Nel, examines Dr. Seuss’s motives, “As a
liberal Democrat,” Nel writes, “Seuss cared deeply about the environment. That led him to write ‘The Lorax.…The Butter Battle Book is a critique of the arms race…” (2004).
As for me, I have multiple motives: adventure motivated me to write “Running the Rapids,” for Sports Illustrated for Kids, about a white water raft trip down the Colorado River through the Grand Canyon (1992), curiosity motivated me to write Toilets, Bathtubs, Sinks, and Sewers: A History of the Bathroom (1994). A sense of responsibility and community motivated me to write and take many photographs, including the cover image, for Corpses, Coffins, and Crypts: A History of Burial (1997), and to weave my experiences into the book. Because, I decided, it was not fair to ask readers to deal with such a difficult and intimate subject and leave myself out. As for my magazine articles, including a cover story on “Girls and Sports” for Sports Illustrated for Kids (1993), and 10 books women’s history, including Rosie the Riveter: Women Working on the Home Front in World War II (1995), Where the Action Was: Women War Correspondents in World War II (2002), and Girls: A History of Growing Up Female in America (2000), my motive is passion, pure unadulterated passion and the hope that my passion is contagious! To that end, I included a picture of myself in Girls as an invitation for readers to insert their pictures and stories in the book making it expand like an accordion because--We are all History-Makers!
The nonfiction=information/fiction=pleasure equations are not only evoked to teach kids about writer’s motives, but also to teach children what to expect from nonfiction and fiction books. Goodness, I am certainly glad, no one ever limited my expectations of books like that and left me free to discover in both nonfiction and fiction-- escape, adventure, insights, inspiration, stimulation, solace, solutions, life lessons, belly laughs, powerful feelings, personal growth and on and on.
I was also free to discover the fact that information can be found in varying amounts in both nonfiction and fiction books, as can pleasure! There are so many information-rich fiction books by, for example, James Mitchener, Richard North Patterson, Bharati Mukherjee, Isabel Allende, Maxine Hong Kingston, and Barbara Kingsolver. John Jakes, the author of the bestselling series The Kent Family Chronicles, prides himself on the historical accuracy of his novels: “I might be the only instructor a given reader has about a particular bit of history,” he says, “so it ought to be right…We get enough misinformation in the world as it is. I’d rather not contribute any more” (p. 28).
As for finding pleasure in nonfiction books, if you doubt this, take the time to read Rachel Carson’s nonfiction books about the sea or Dervla Murphy’s travel books.
I could go on, as I am sure many of you could, and talk about more manifestations of “anti-nonfictionism” in, for example, the areas of reviews and awards and research and recommended reading lists, and the choices of read alouds.
What are the consequences of anti-nonfictionism?
First, anti-nonfictionism drastically limits students’ choices of reading materials.
Second, anti-nonfictionism prevents students from gaining the knowledge and skills to be successful test-takers and thinkers and writers in school.
Third, anti-nonfictionism prevents kids from gaining the knowledge and abilities they need to function in the world as adults, and, as citizens of a democracy.
Although anti-nonfictionism pervades the world of children’s literature, I do see signs of growing recognition of the importance of children’s nonfiction literature-more articles and books on the subject, more awards, the attention of this conference. But there is so much more to do. To that end, I offer the following ten suggestions:
1. Conduct a nonfiction inventory of libraries for children -home, classrooms, school and public, and, if necessary, expand and update the nonfiction materials, including what I call ephemeral nonfiction, e.g. descriptive materials available at museums and parks; playbills and program notes; magazines and newspapers; stamps; postcards, maps, etc.
2. Assess the use of nonfiction books as read-alouds, reading assignments, on reading lists, and throughout the curriculum, and, if necessary, expand and update the nonfiction materials. Note: I have included activities across the curriculum for a number of my books on my web site: www. pennycolman.com.
3. Turn everyday nonfiction events and objects into springboards for lessons across the curriculum, e.g. a quarter from the 50-state quarter program, especially Alabama’s quarter that features Helen Keller and is the only coin in the world with Braille; a personal excursion such as a blueberry picking experience that I used as a springboard for lessons in science, history, math, health, movement, language arts, music, geography, and writing; a public event such as the New York City Marathon that one of my students who ran in it used as a springboard for lessons across the curriculum etc.
4. Think deeply, at least twice, about everything you write or hear and read about children’s nonfiction literature.
5. Disentangle the terms “information and “informational” from nonfiction.
6. Adopt the following basic definitions:
Nonfiction Literature-writing about reality in which nothing is made up.
Fiction Literature--writing in which anything can be made up.
Hybrid Literature-writing that mixes nonfiction and fiction
7. Scrutinize Author’s Notes and Acknowledgments and teach students to scrutinize them as a basis for classifying books and as a source of information about specifically what is and is not made up and the extent of the author’s research.
8. Engage in discussions that flourish in the world of adult nonfiction, e.g. the issue of blurring the boundaries, the use of composite characters and scenes, fiddling with facts, filling in gaps, aesthetics, etc.
9. Consider what it means to respond “Yes” instead of “No” when a kid asks, “Is this story real? Did this really happen?”
10. Use quality nonfiction-essays, books, articles-to teach writing. Study the craft and art of writing nonfiction-talk about topics, think about themes, explore structures, identify literary devices, understand voice and tone and style, analyze opening and endings and scenes and transitions.
With a concentrated effort, we can end anti-nonfictionism. We can close the gap, the mismatch between what is currently considered literature for kids and the realities of the demands of school and of the adult world.
Nonfiction is the language of authorities-teachers, preachers, doctors, lawyers, judges, generals, CEOs, politicians and presidents.
Nonfiction is the language of everyday things--news, instructions, reports, presentations, letters, email, records, documents, court decisions and extraordinary things such as Abraham Lincoln’s Gettysburg Address and Elizabeth Cady Stanton’s Declaration of Sentiments.
Nonfiction is the language of all the debates of policies and issues-social, economic, political and environmental-that affect everyone’s life throughout the world.
Nonfiction is the currency with which public policies and legislation are enacted
societal needs are discussed, cultural aesthetics are defined, life lessons are conveyed, historical narratives are transmitted. The currency with which matters of war and peace are decided.
Nonfiction is everywhere. It is the stuff of everyday life-the infinite list of activities and duties and decisions and desires and feelings and fears and happiness. It is birthdays and festivals and funerals. It is winning and losing and bouncing back. It is the WOW experiences of life-reveling in nature, witnessing an athletic achievement, marveling at an artistic creation or theatrical or musical, fulfilling a dream, falling in love. Nonfiction is there and here and everywhere. That is why I’m hooked on nonfiction. How about you?
References
Barry, L. (2002, Feb.). Nonfictional. http://www.salon.com/mwt/comics/2002/02/28/lynda28/index.html
Buck, P. (1931). The good earth. New York: John Day.
Colman, P. (1989, Oct.) Boulder house scare. U*S*Kids A Weekly Reader Magazine, 29-31.
(1990, April). But not ms. anderson. U*S*Kids A Weekly Reader Magazine, 36-37.
(1997). Corpses, coffins, and crypts: a history of burial. New York: Henry Holt.
(1991). Dark closets and noises in the night. Mahwah, NJ: Paulist Press.
(1989, Dec.). Don’t touch. U*S*Kids A Weekly Reader Magazine, 6-8.
(2000). Girls: A History of Growing Up Female in America. New York: Scholastic.
(1993, Sept.). Girls in sports. Sports Illustrated for Kids, 50-59.
(1989, May). I like it when kids laugh. U*S*Kids A Weekly Reader Magazine, 8-10.
(1988). I never do anything bad. Mahwah, NJ: Paulist Press.
(1991, July). Really red hair. U*S*Kids A Weekly Reader Magazine, 14-16.
(1995). Rosie the riveter: women working on the home front in world war II. New York: Crown.
(1990, Sept). Storm. Cricket, 62-67.
(1994). Toilets, Bathtubs, Sinks, and Sewers: A History of the Bathroom. New York: Atheneum.
(2002). Where the action was: women war correspondents in world war II. New York: Crown.
Hollaway, B. (2003, April). Voices on writing: Barbara Ehrenreich. ASJA Monthly, 5.
Jakes, J. (1998, Feb.). Writer’s Digest. P. 28.
Morgan, M. (1953, October 15). Gypsies. The Warren Observer, 14.
(1953, October 29). A Tale for Hallowe’en. The Warren Observer, 12.
Morgan, N. (1953, December 23). Everyday Psychology. The Warren Observer, 3.
Morgan, P. (1978). I know what to do!
Nels, Philip. (2004). Dr. seuss: american icon. New York: Continuum.
On novel-reading for women (1867). Godey’s Lady’s Book.
Orwell, G. (1946). Why I write. In G. Orwell, A collection of essays. San Diego, CA: Harcourt, Inc.
Paterson, K. (1988). Gates of Excellence. New York: E.P. Dutton.
Smith, Lucinda Irwin. (1994). Women who write, vol II. New York: Julian Messner.
Willard, F. (1886). How to win. New York: Funk & Wagnalls.
Williams, T. (2001). Why I write. In C. Forche & P. Gerard, Writing creative nonfiction, 6-7. Cincinnati, OH: Story Press.
A Selected Bibliography
Articles
Clark, R.P. (2000). The line between fact and fiction. Creative Nonfiction, 16, 4-15.
Colman, P. (2002) Adventures in nonfiction. Journal of Children’s Literature, 28(2), 58-61.
--- (1999) Nonfiction is literature too. The New Advocate, 12: 215-223.
Duke, N. K., Bennett-Armistead, S. & Roberts, E. M. (2003). Filling the great void. Why we should bring nonfiction into the early-grade classroom. American Educator.
Fryxell, D. (1998). The “non’ in “nonfiction.” Writer’s Digest, 63-4.
Moss, B. & Hendershot, J. (2002). Exploring sixth graders’ selection of nonfiction trade books. The Reading Teacher, 56, 6-17.
Books
Bamford, R & J. Kristo, eds, (2001). Making facts come alive: Choosing quality nonfiction
literature K-8 (2nd ed.). Norwood, MA: Christopher-Gordon Publishers, Inc.
(2000) Checking out nonfiction K-8. good choices for best learning. Norwood, MA:Christopher-Gordon Publishers, Inc.
Cooley, Thomas. (1997). The norton sampler, 5th ed. New York: W.W. Norton.
Freeman, Evelyn B. and Diane Goetz Person. (1992). Using nonfiction trade books in the
elementary classroom. Urbana, IL: National Council of Teachers of English.
Franklin, Jon. (1986). Writing for story. New York: Plume, Penguin Group
Gerard, P. (1996). Creative nonfiction: Researching and crafting stories of real life
Cincinnati: Story Press.
Harvey, S. (1998). Nonfiction matters: Reading, writing and research in grades 3-8. York,
ME: Stenhouse.
Kerrane, Kevin and Ben Yagoda, eds (1997). The art of fact: A historical anthology of literary journalism. New York: Simon and Schuster.
Mallett, Margaret. (1992) Marking Facts Matter: Reading Nonfiction 5-11, London: Paul Chapman.
Moss, Barbara. (2002) Exploring the Literature of Fact: Children’s Nonfiction Trade Books in the Elementary Classroom. Guilford.
Tuchman, B. (1985). Practicing history. New York: Knopf.
Zinsser, William, (2001). On writing well: An informal guide to writing nonfiction (6th ed.).
New York: HarperCollins, 1994.
Journals
Creative Nonfiction, 5501 Walnut Street, Suite 202, Pittsburgh, PA 15232, tele (412) 688-0304;
fax (412) 683-9173; e-mail: crn2+@pitt.edu
Fourth Genre, Michigan State University Press, 1405 S. Harrison Road, 25 Manly Miles
Building, East Lansing, MI 48823-5202; tele. (517)355-9543; fax: (517)432-2611.
River Teeth: A Journal of Nonfiction Narrative, River Teeth, Department of English, Ashland
University, Ashland, OH 44805.
Web Sites
Activities for Readers and Teachers: www.pennycolman.com
Speeches on Research and Writing: www.pennycolman.com
Creative Nonfiction: www.creativenonfiction.org
Drucker Nonfiction: http://www.ets.uidaho.edu/druker/nonfic.html
Fourth Genre: www.msupress.msu.edu/journals/fourthgenre
River Teeth: www.ashland.edu/colleges/arts_sci/english/riverteeth/intro.htm
Teen Ink: Nonfiction Written by Teens: http://teenink.com/nonfiction |
On Writing Corpses, Coffins, and Crypts: A History of Burial
Speech by Penny Colman at an event celebrating the publication of Corpses, Coffins, and Crypts: A History of Burial, November, 1997
I am particularly happy to have my sister Cam here from San Jacinto, California, and my brother Kip here from Jamestown, New York. The last time I saw them was in June when our mother died.
We had learned that she had cancer in mid-February. At that time, I was in the final stages of completing Corpses, Coffins, and Crypts: A History of Burial. I was compiling the end matter, tinkering with the text, taking photographs, writing captions, keying the photographs into the text, checking and double-checking information. So the news of my mother's illness catapulted me into a situation where I was dealing with my mother's dying and death at the same time that I was working to bring this book-a book on corpses, coffins, and crypts-to life.
Needless to say, those months were very intense. At one point, I said to my son Stephen, "This is the wrong book to be working on now." When he replied, "Actually it is the right book," I was startled. But as we tended to my mother's dying, death, and burial, I realized that Stephen was right.
He was right because after researching and writing Corpses, Coffins, and Crypts: A History of Burial I was full of useful information and I had gained a measure of calmness about death and the burial process that I shared with my family as we dug her grave, provided our own urn for her cremated remains, and had a funeral procession with a Dixieland band and a fire truck.
My mother did not live to see the finished book, but she did see the page proofs of Chapter 8 that opens with the story about her painting of Lazarus that she painted after my father's death many years ago. Although she could not speak, she could smile, and smile she did.
I call this book my risk-taking book.
The first risk I took was even agreeing to write a book about death and burial. I was hesitant because I knew that it would get me close, if not right back into, painful personal experiences, which I had over the years wrestled into a manageable place. But then I would say to myself-- maybe it would not have been so painful if I had known more. If people around me had been open and matter-of-fact about death and burial. If they had been willing to think, talk, to answer questions about death and burial. Back and forth I went talking to myself until one day I took a deep breath and said, "I will do it."
Having made the decision, I was determined that the book I wrote would be not only useful, but also engaging, empowering, and beautiful. It would have vitality and universality. Setting such a standard for a book about corpses, coffins, and crypts was the second risk that I took. And I decided to write in the genre known as creative nonfiction that is widely used by writers of nonfiction for adults and that I had used as a journalist and essayist for adults. That allowed me to make myself part of the story and that was the third risk that I took-writing about myself despite my apprehensions about stirring up painful memories.
I did this for several reasons. First, as a writer, I am constantly thinking about the reader, in particular, I think about how I can reach out my hand and say to the reader: "Here is my hand, take it, and we will go through this story together." Since I knew that some reader would also have painful memories, I decided that it was only fair that I include parts of myself and my experiences in the book.
Second, as I reviewed my experiences, I realized that they touched on every topic that I planned to cover and that I could use them as a way to move in and out of the scientific, historical, anthropological, archaeological, and cultural material that I wanted to present.
In addition to my own experiences, I included other people's experiences. This was my fourth risk in the sense that I knew these people were trusting me to use their true stories in a way that honored their experiences. Obviously I assume this responsibility every time I write about another person's experience. However, most of the people I have written about are dead historical figures. But in this book the people were very much alive, including my sister, and my dentist. Nevertheless, I took on this risk for several reasons, one of which I wrote about in the preface: "I wrote this book because I believe that death, a hard, sad, unavoidable fact of life, is easier to accept when we are able to talk about it and get answers to our questions. When we hear other people's stories. When we learn about the variety of attitudes and rituals that have existed concerning death and burial. Nobody is immune to death. People die. I will and so will you. But if we are prepared, we can deal with death, however and whenever it happens."
As an aside I want to note that I deliberately chose to identify people who told me their stories only by the name they typically used, e.g. Peg and Doug, and I did not include any biographical information, e.g. what they did and where they lived. This was part of my overall decision to write in an informal voice, which is also why I used contractions. My goal was create a warm and conversational tone that would invite readers to engage with the text and pictures and think about and reflect on their own experiences.
My final risk had to do with all the photographs that you will find in the book-130 to be exact, 80 of which I took as I traveled from Key West, Florida to Rochester, Iowa to Julian, California. This was a risk for many reasons, but mostly because of the sheer scope of the undertaking that kept me constantly fending off nagging self-doubts about my ability to pull off my vision of including evocative photographs that would inform, inspire, and even prompt readers to laugh or cry or say to a friend, "Hey, look at this!"
I hope that reading Corpses, Coffins, and Crypts does not make you too queasy or tangle up your emotions too much. Instead, I hope that the book intrigues you and motivates you to think about how you will deal with death, an inevitable part of all our lives.
Understanding death does not necessarily take always our anxieties or fears about our own death, or our sadness about other people's death but it does help us find ways to continue on with our lives.
There is a whole section in my book on epitaphs that I organized into five categories:poignant, pious, patriotic, historical, and humorous. Here is one of the poignant epitaphs that I found:
When I held you tight
All the stars seems so much brighter
They lit up the night.
Here is one of the humorous epitaphs:
I always said
the only way you would
get this recipe
Was over my dead body.
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